|
English 99 Three-Paragraph Assignment Errors and
Corrections Punctuation/Capitalization Original: L My favorite qualities are:
honesty, determination, and commitment. L My favorite qualities are;
honesty, determination, and commitment. C My favorite qualities are honesty, determination, and
commitment. Using the Underline UNDERLINE names of
television shows, movies, magazines, newspapers, books to distinguish them
from common use. C The T.V. show Seinfeld is my favorite because
Seinfeld is so funny when he is with Kramer. Reason is because Original: L The first reason that this is my favorite movie is because
it has a lot of action. C C The first reason that
this is my favorite movie is L One of the reasons this is my favorite activity is
because I get to spend quality time with my students. C OR C One of the reasons
this is my favorite activity is Comma splice and run-on sentence errors L I don’t get to spend as much time with him as I would
like, playing
cars gives me the opportunity to play with him and spend as much time with
him as I would like. L She’s in gymnastics,
she’s really good and flexible. L Towards the back of the magazine, there is a section
called member stories,
here people can write in telling about their outdoor experience and the
equipment they used on their outdoor adventures. L The ones about heroes, for example, have real substance L one of my favorites was about a border patrol officer in L The cinemas are connected to the mall,
it is very convenient for the shoppers. Sentence Fragments Original: L I really like doing things in the winter. Like snow skiing, sledding, and snowman
building. C I
really like doing things in the winter like snow skiing, sledding, and
snowman building. L Instead of staying home and feeling guilty. I can get in my car and go to the gym. C Instead of staying home and
feeling guilty, I can get in my car and go to the gym. L I always enjoy the weekends throughout the year.
Especially during the summer when the air is warm and fresh. C I always enjoy the weekends throughout
the year especially during the summer when the air is warm and fresh. L Premium sound with a CD player; if it’s going to look
good, it must sound good. C The car must have premium sound with a CD player;
if it’s going to look good, it must sound good. L An SUV has plenty of spacious room for children and all
of the things they bring along. Enough
room for camping gear in the summer and band equipment during the school
year. C An SUV has plenty of spacious room for children and all of the things they bring along with enough room for camping gear in the summer and band equipment during the school year. |
