English 102 Essay:____________________

J. Roth

Peer Editing Evaluation Form—Living History Interview

Please feel free to discuss this rough draft with its author. Ask questions; give positive feedback; see yourself as the reader and share with the author what would make this essay more forceful and enjoyable. Please use this form to note problems that may need tweaking.

General

In general, is the essay unified? Do all the parts fit together?

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In general, is the essay coherent (properly organized)? Are the parts in the most effective order?

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In general, is the essay complete (adequately developed)? Are there enough examples to get to know the person interviewed?

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Introduction

Is the introduction effective? Does it establish a sense of presence? Does it invite you to read more about the person’s life?

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Body Paragraphs

Is each body paragraph focused on a particular point or event? Which ones are successful? Which ones could use more focus?

Conclusion

Is the conclusion effective? Does it close the essay properly?

Mechanics

Sentence fragments? Comma Splices? Run-on sentences? Words Often Confused? Point of View (switching to “you” without reason)? Pronoun Agreement? Variety of Words—Does the vocabulary used make the essay more interesting to read?

Please identify potential problem areas for the author.