English 99/ Winter 2012         1-6-2012          Name:__________________________

 

Diagnostic Essay Areas of Concern

 

___Sentence fragments

___Comma splices         

___Run-on sentences                                  

___Words commonly confused (Homonyms) errors

___Subject-verb agreement errors  Singular/plural errors

___Pronoun confusion (unclear antecedent)

___Shift in person (“it” or “they” to “you”)                     

___Diction (Wording) problems.  (minimal vocabulary usage)    

___Wordiness              

___Clichés

___Punctuation                             

___Spelling

___Other ______________________________________________