J. Roth

English 99                                             STUDENT SENTENCES—First Group

 

 

Directions:  Below are sentences in need of rewriting.

 

  1. With the hard work and dedication that I put forth to get a new car, that is the reason that my car is my most valued possession.

 

  1. With every possession that a person has they cherish one more than the rest.

 

  1. With all these poor ways of communication leads to mind games.

 

  1. With another job to get to, it would make it even more difficult to have time to study.

 

  1. Some jobs are easier to accomplish then others.

 

  1. The main reason that my car is my most valued possession and that would be that it takes me places.

 

  1. I have many new friends that I have met by attending college.

 

  1. I saved up a good sum of money from my job and rented a limousine to take her to a nice restaurant, also including roses and ring I had bought for her, but nevertheless she broke up with me the following week.

 

  1. Consequently, I made a huge mistake on my ex-girlfriend in high school that I frequently look back on sometimes.

 

  1. Friends my come and go, but with a wife or husband they’re going to be with you through thick and thin.

 

  1. I chose to further my education in the health field because they are greatly needed.

 

  1. I was working two jobs while attending High School.

 

  1. If I took the new job, I would struggle in school, the sleep and free time I would lose, and the financial hardship would be great.

 

 

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