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Using the Internet can help us learn many things; for example, you can find various doctors in your area . . . .

Having friends that we can rely on can calm us if stressful situations.  Friends can also lift your emotional well-being by giving you an ear to . . . .

Our society has become so technological that you can hardly keep up with . . . .

 

Shift in Number

If someone is away from home, they can simply

 A student must decide--otherwise they will forever be . . . .

 

If someone is away from home, they can simply

 

Announcements

In this essay, I will show how aliens are living in our midst and present a danger of which we are unaware.

In the following paragraphs, I will present to you the positives of owning a cellphone.

 

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Another way that owning a cellphone can be a negative element in our lives is . . .

Another negative effect of owning a cellphone is

Due to the fact that we live in a world of endless technological progress . . . .

With the ability to communicate with anyone at any time we find ourselves mindlessly browsing through social media . . . .

The ability to communicate with anyone at any time allows us to browse through social media . . . .

 

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Cellphones have a direct affect on our brains

One direct affect of ownership is . . . .

One very affective use is to supplement the . . . .

Cellphone can effect our behavior in many ways.

The constant use of cellphones has many affects on our behavior

Some of the more noticeable affects are . . . .

The social affects are even more profound

Have you ever wondered how cellphones are effecting us?

 

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We can be positivly and completly  

Cellphones don’t effect older citizen’s as much as younger ones.  In fact, in many country’s, cellphone use is far greater then ours.

Many city’s want

 

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