Step #2—Reorganize supporting details for best effect, paragraph by paragraph

Reorganized paragraph details è

Note than each detail below has been assigned the location (number) where it will be presented in the paragraph. We will rough out each paragraph using this new order of details.

GOAT’S MILK PARAGRAPH

Details ò	Location ò
Freshness date important—no preservatives	This will be the final detail
Aroma	This detail will be second
Layers or levels of flavor	This detail will go third
Texture	This detail will go first

BRAZILIAN FLAVORING SYRUPS PARAGRAPH

Details ò	Location ò
Not “extracts” like those in U.S.	This detail will go first
U.S. crystals don’t all absorb	This detail will be second
No residue when mixed	This detail will go third
More expensive but worth it	This will be the final detail

DRYER’S ICE CREAM PARAGRAPH

Details ò	Location ò
Go with Dryer’s Satiny Vanilla for first try	This will be the final detail
Satin-smooth	This detail will be second
Carries message	This detail will go first
Blendable but taste doesn’t disappear	This detail will go third

E Now decide on the best order best order for these support paragraphs.

Then you are ready to fill out the Essay Planning Sheet